I like most of what you did here, and it's all very skillfully done, but I prefer the original warmer skintone. Maybe it's an old-person thing - and I'm old, so no apologies - or just my general preference for warmtones. But maybe you're making him match the other pale and wan images in your portfolio, and I do like the high-key looks on those. Oh, and what a glorious model. Nice light and I love the corner, too. -J: